*nods happily*
So here ya go, and I hope you'll enjoy this.
![]() |
| Image from http://membres.multimania.fr/mandragores/melusine.html |
WANT
By Cherie Larkins
She dreamt of skin. Smooth, not undulating…pearly
pink but ruddy once under the heat of the noonday sun. Sometimes when the
others had crawled inside the crevices of their rock, their bodies curled tight
as if seeking for warmth, she’d go up just shy of the glimmering surface. Chin
tilted up, eyes squinting, letting the dappled, layered light filter through
the water to touch her face.
A
caress. A promise of love.
Diamonds
glinting off the eternal gray that is her prison. Yes, she’d heard of diamond
rings and dancing feet and human touch. Her heart sighed as she whirled around,
the viscous lake hindering her natural form and grace.
Melusine.
Her
mother’s quiet call seeped into her consciousness. Despite the miles between
them, her mother’s probing mind reached hers, long-tentacled thoughts grasping
and prodding for a hold. Melusine blocked her mother out and sighed.
She
gazed upwards with longing, at the dying light abandoning her into the abysmal
darkness of her home. Melusine coiled her two-pronged serpentine tail around
her tiny waist. If she closed her eyes, she could pretend they were arms
wrapping her in an embrace. Just like in grandmama’s stories.
Before
the curse.
Melusine, her mother called again.
She
frowned. Mother disapproved, of course. Men
are brutes, their hearts impure, she had said. Her mother, who once loved
too.
Melusine
let her fingers trail over her slick, obsidian scales, tracing where they end
and where her pale, almost-human skin began. Scutes peppered her shoulders and
around her elbows, running down her arms to pool at her wrists like thick
cuffs. Her tender breasts escaped this monstrosity, however, and she rubbed her
dark nipples, reveling in their untarnished beauty.
Grandmama
once thought-whispered to her the scent of ripe olives lingering in the air. Of
the cool, tangy taste of wine, running like fire down her throat. Of warm, soft
lips pressing hot breaths against plump thighs. Grandmama, who clung to the
edge of the lake day after day after day. Hiding among bulrushes and cattails, and
all to catch a glimpse of the man with the hat. One day, he didn’t come and
grandmama coiled inside her hole never to surface again.
Mother’s
frantic thoughts intruded into Melusine’s head. Come back, come back, they said. She’d forbidden her children from
rising out of the depths of their sanctuary. Or hell, as Melusine thought of the algae-covered rock they lived in
at the bottom of the lake. Melusine thrashed her tail in anger. Why couldn’t
she turn human, even for a day? Grandmama had a year, her mother a month. They’d
lived on two legs in the land of men, flaunting their wondrous beauty, catching
kisses on red, red lips. But the curse became stronger as they got weaker
living on tainted waters and broken dreams. By the time Melusine was born, her
mother could no longer keep her human form.
I want to feel. Melusine’s thought
overpowered her mother’s, drowning out her voice.
The
surface broke. A body plunged down—arms and legs flailing, kicking. Murky bubbles
rose up to cover the human’s face. His torso twisted, brilliant gold hair
fanning out around his head. Melusine reached for him, her fingers clasping fabric.
His eyes widened as they met her gaze.
Beautiful, beautiful human.
She
pulled him down, her tail embracing his body, siphoning off the last vestiges
of warmth from his blood. Her hands explored his skin, muscles taut underneath,
her fingers splayed against his chest.
Melusine
leaned forward and touched her yearning lips to his cold ones. His thrashings
ceased.
The
water sent out one lone ripple and stilled. Melusine loosened her grip and the
body sunk down into nothingness.
Her
tail glimmered. Melusine raked her hands over her breasts and down her stomach,
leaving red streaks where her nails had gouged her. A cry lodged in her throat,
swelling, suffocating her with grief. Melusine notched a fingernail underneath
her scale and pulled, tearing off the layer. She flinched as the raw skin was
exposed. Pink and smooth.
Her
hands worked quickly, pulling and ripping. Melusine bit her lip as each tear
exacerbated the fire scorching her body. Finally…finally, her dream had come
true.
Her
arms outstretched, Melusine smiled and stared at the crimson water until her
vision blurred, and there was only darkness to accompany her descent home.
~end~
























19 comments:
creepy scary mermaid, but I wanted to keep reading!
That was wonderful and creepy. Love it!
I love this story! You're an awesome writer, Cherie :)
Really really lovely writing.
Awww,thanks, guys! <3
Nice! I'm not sure what I'm going to do with Z, and I've been thinking about it for weeks. You handled the U challenge pretty well considering you were blocked. Hopefully inspiration will hit me when I finally have to type up Z!
Laura Barnes @laurabwriter.blogspot.com
Stopping by to say "Hi" from the A to Z. We are so close to the finish line!
ScribblesFromJenn
Happy A to Z-ing!
You are a talented lady! Great tale (pun possibly intended...) :)
Dark and twisted--I love your take on mermaids! Very unusual, and great writing.
The Golden Eagle
The Eagle's Aerial Perspective
Yeah, U is a tough one but you ended up with a brilliant post. Love your story! :)
I like the creepy, scary mermaid thing and this is phenomenal. Totally loved it. Great job on U!
A bit dark but nevertheless it was an intriguing read. I loved it. The writing is so lyrical.
Love the pacing. Thank you
Following
Kate
http://whenkateblogs.blogspot.com/
Wow, what a powerful story! Sad and twisted ending, but poignantly beautiful nonetheless!
J.C. Martin
A to Z Blogger
THis is great! And tragic. But you did it well. I'd love a dark underwater story like this.
How beautiful and dark. I didn't want it to end!
Wow, a wondeful, dark tale and some sumptuous word choice.
This was lovely and creepy and dark - excellent! :)
Happy A-Z!
Thank you so much for all of your kind comments! <3 <3 <3
Post a Comment
Thanks for stopping by!