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Nothing Personal but Save the Drama for your Mama or What Not to Write Part 1: CLICHES
Cliches.
Hey, I saw a couple of you cringed. :)
Cliches have the ability to slip in our writing because of their familiarity. We use them, we hear them used all the time and around us, and we cling to them because let's face it, trying to think of an apt metaphor for a particular scene in our novel can be intimidating. And cliches? They're part of our comfort zones.
But for a writer who wishes to get published, cliches are the plague. Run while you can. *grin* As Salvador Dali once said: "The first man to compare the cheeks of a young woman to a rose was obviously a poet; the first to repeat it was possibly an idiot." (I got that from Wikipedia. Hope it's true. You never know with internet sources these days.)
Interestingly enough, these phrases used to be regarded as striking or beautiful before they became overused and turned into, well, cliches. Just goes to show that fame and beauty is fleeting, even for words.
So. I have a game. Let's play Who Can Spot the Cliches in the Narrative Below. [I had fun making this up.]
Disclaimer: The author of this blog is not responsible for any physical damage the readers may contract while reading this piece. Proceed at your own risk.
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How many did you find? Any guesses? Did you even make it to the end or did your brain explode halfway through?
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Wednesday, April 06, 2011
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- Precy Larkins
- I'm a YA writer who loves to read. Also a mom of 3. My life is crazy but always fun. :) I'm a member of The YA Club, a group blog about YA books. You can also find me blogging at: http://precylarkins.wordpress.com Represented by the lovely Julia A. Weber of J. A. Weber Literaturagentur GmbH. Thanks for stopping by! Email me: writercherie@gmail.com
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9 comments:
I may have lost count, 37? Am I close? That was fun. I do use cliches in dialogue occasionally because I think most people use them in conversation now and then.
You were close! My count was 41. Unless if I overlooked something. =)
I think cliches are fine in dialogue. Besides, if your character is someone who employs cliches in their everyday conversations, then yes, it would be acceptable.
Haha! This was awesome! I counted 45, but maybe I was wrong? Seriously hilarious and well written, wow. That had to take a while.
One thing that actually really worked well and would rock in a novel was the way you turned one of these cliches on their head: It ain’t over until the fat lady sings and she sure wasn’t going to let that fat lady get on the stage.
That rocked! A lot of voice in that excerpt. If you right this good just being silly, your real stuff must be fabulous. Thanks for the fun!
LOL. That's supposed to say WRITE this good, BTW. Sorry! Looks like it's bedtime for me. heh
Wow, thanks for the compliment Anita. And this coming from you who totally rocks! =)
*skipping off to bed. LOL.
As for the count, you know, i had it written down somewhere but i lost it. Will have to check again. =)
Well there was definitely more than 30 so Wowza... I think there is such a thing as TOO MUCH! I bet that took some work compiling! Not an easy task to shove so many in to one piece!
I'm a firm believer that if it's done well or for a point cliche's can stay. I use them for a mother who thinks she knows best. However the main character explains that she is indeed a walking cliche and I believe it works. I have a publishing house intereseted in it so I guess it's all in how it's handled.
I'm a newbie here! Great blog! Great first topic for me to join in on! I'm going to have a whole lot of fun here!
Happy Thursday!
Hi Jen! Welcome, welcome. Please take a seat, put up your feet, and enjoy the show. I'm always happy to have fellow writers drop by my little haven here.
Wow. Goodluck with the publishing house. I totally agree that if handled well, cliches can work. As with everything else in life, moderation is the key. And as I had mentioned to Sarah, if that's the quirk of a character then it is perfectly acceptable. =)
Thanks for stopping by my blog--I love your post on clichés as well! So fun to see different takes on the topic. My brain hurt too much to count them, and I knew I was too late to this game to be a winner.
So so fun reading! Thank you for sharing :)
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